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The Music of the Night
The Music of the Night
Poetry Corner #3

Can you see me? Can you hear me? Can you feel my pain?
Why is it that when I want to cry out, I'm left alone again?
I want someone to stay by me, someone to hold me tight,
Will you shun me, turn meĀ  away, and tell me it's not right?
Or would you, could you hold me close, and whisper in my ear,
That when I need you by my side, you will always be near?
Don't go away and leave me here along like others have,
Please, show me how to live again, how to love and laugh.
All I really ask is for you not to turn away,
Without you I'm not sure if I can live another day.

~*~

I don't have a title for this poem. It was mostly written a month ago, though the first few lines date back a couple weeks beforehand. A friend of mine suggested randomly spacing out the last few words, but I'm not sure whether it would look better like that or not.

I hope you all liked it.

November 10, 2003 | 10:23 PM Comments  0 comments

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